求英语高手翻译,汉译英啊.[急]下跪了！

Question

一定要准确 用词优美点，拜托，很重要的表白啊。。。

“首先，请原谅我的冒昧…一个内向而又对你在自己的生活中出现而无可奈何的中国男孩的冒昧，他就是你面前的这个傻瓜，我的确很内向…不知股足了多少勇气才把你约出来，记得上个星期五我和你相遇数次都想过去问你的邮箱地址，结果紧张的我是无法使用我那颤抖的双脚的，事后我痛恨我自己的懦弱，使得上个周末过的十分痛苦，我不能怪你太美丽而使我很有压力，只能怪自己太懦弱。可是现在命运给我这个机会，不管结果如何我都要说出来，我爱你。从第一次见面起，就感觉你是那么的熟悉…你是那么的可爱，能使一个并不太懂英语而又性格内向，和传统保守的中国男孩对你说这些，你的可爱掩盖了一切我的不敢和懦弱。所以我总是说你是一个会使用魔法，不可思议的女孩，我想和你恋爱…请你听完这首歌曲，给你一首歌的时间考虑…再给我答案…不管是Ok or No，你的出现会改变你眼前这个傻瓜，他想证明他不是懦夫，你的出现会在这个傻瓜的生命里留下深深的印记…这是爱，你会明白…”
谢绝机器翻译..

Answer 1

Please first forgive my boldness. A shy Chinese boy who could do nothing to stop you entering his life is the idiot standing in front of you now. I am really shy, you do not know how much courage it took me ask you to meet me today. Do you remember last Friday, when we met several times but I was so nervous I could barely move, let alone asking you for your email address. Afterwards, I hated my cowardice. I can't blame you for my miserable weekend, I can't blame you for being so beautiful that I can hardly resist your charm, all I can do is to blame myself for being so easily influenced by you. But now, fate has given this one chance, to say this to you, I love you. Since the first time we met, I felt you are so familiar as someone I have known for all my life. You are so lovely that you charmed a shy and traditional Chinese boy to stand in front of you and tell you all these things. Your loveliness covered all my cowardice and weakness. So I always say that you are the incredibel and magical girl who can make my heart pound with just a flick of your beautiful hair. I want to be your boyfriend. Please, listen to this song, please, take this song's time to consider what I said, to give me this one chance. No matter what your answer is, your existence has already changed the idoit in front of you. He wants to prove to you that he is no coward, that he has fight in him, that you are someone worth his effort to chase after, something that would pain him to give up on. Please remember, that you have left a heavy imprint on my life that time shall never erace. This is love, and I hope you can understand.

希望对你有帮助~

天上~

注：翻译的时候多加了点感性的东西。预祝楼主成功。我还是喜欢帮人翻译情书之类的东西啊o(∩_∩)o

附上一首自己想的英文打油诗：

No matter how long it takes
No matter how hard it gets
I will try my hardest
To be your best.

中文：
不管会有多长
不管会有多苦难
我会尽我最大的努力
成为你最好的人

Answer 2

First of all, please forgive my liberty... A reserved but again to you in your own life appears and helpless Chinese boy of liberty, he is in front of you fool, I really introverted... Don't know how much courage enough shares to come out around, remember last Friday and I met you several times all want to past ask your email address, result strain of I was unable to use me the trembling feet, the event I hate my own faintness, making last weekend very pain, I can't blame you beautiful and makes me very stressful, have only themselves to blame weak. But now fate give me this opportunity, regardless of the outcome, I have to say I love you. From the first meeting on, just feel you are so familiar with... You're so cute, can ?

Answer 3

追外国女。。。不懂外语。。。表白了之后，，，你怎么谈恋爱啊？？？我跟我BF刚开始沟通起来也有问题 都说英语 可是口音不同 都容易误会，，这点儿话你都不会用英语说，，，我看你还是算了吧

Answer 4

My personnal view—You had better not say your declaration of love in this way. Because of the cultural diversity,the girls of western counties are different from chinese girls.They prefer the confident guys but not the timid ones. Anyway, good luck.

Answer 5

"First of all, please forgive my liberty... a reserved but again to you in your own life appears and helpless Chinese boy of liberty, he is in front of you fool, I really don't know strands of sufficient introverted... how much courage to come out around, remember last Friday and I met you several times all want to past ask your email address, result strain of I was unable to use me the trembling feet, the event I hate my own faintness, making last weekend very pain, I can't blame you beautiful and makes me very stressful, have only themselves to blame weak. But now fate give me this opportunity, regardless of the outcome, I have to say I love you. From the first meeting on, just feel you are so familiar... you're so cute, can make a doesn't understand English and introverted, and traditional conservative Chinese boy say to you, these, your lovely covered everything I dare not and cowardly. So I always say you're a will use magic, incredible girl, and I think you love... please finish listen to this song, give you a song time thinking about... give me the answer... whether Ok or No, you appear will change your eyes the fool, he wants to prove he is not a coward, you appear in the fool in the life of a deep imprint... it is love, you will understand..."

Answer 6

First of all, please forgive my liberty... A reserved but again to you in your own life appears and helpless Chinese boy of liberty, he is in front of you fool, I really introverted... Don't know how much courage enough shares to come out around, remember last Friday and I met you several times all want to past ask your email address, result strain of I was unable to use me the trembling feet, the event I hate my own faintness, making last weekend very pain, I can't blame you beautiful and makes me very stressful, have only themselves to blame weak. But now fate give me this opportunity, regardless of the outcome, I have to say I love you. From the first meeting on, just feel you are so familiar with... You're so cute, can make a doesn't understand English and introverted, and traditional conservative Chinese boy say to you, these, your lovely covered everything I dare not and cowardice. So I always say you're a will use magic, incredible girl, and I think you love... Please finish listen to this song, give you a song time thinking about... Give me the answer is... Whether Ok or No, you appear will change your eyes the fool, he wants to prove he is not a coward, you appear in the fool in the life of a deep imprint... It is love, you will understand... "