请帮忙翻译一封致谦信email，取消酒店定单

Question

尊敬的酒店管理人员，你们好，感谢您对我昨天邮件的回复，首先对我的冒昧打扰向您致谦，昨天我在HRS网上向你们酒店预订了两间房，现由于行程原因，需要取消定单，HRS要求我联系贵酒店，我也转了您的电邮给HRS，但HRS要求我请你们酒店发一份明确的同意取消定单的批准，HRS才可以帮我取消定单．由于我个人的原因耽误了您的工作时间我深感报谦，同时再次请求您的原谅．也麻烦您再回一封邮件给我，说明酒店同意取消定单，非常感谢您！！
我个人不会英文，这是请朋友翻译发送的，如有不周，请您谅解！
再次为占用了您的宝贵时间致谦！
祝您生意兴隆，全家幸福！！

烦请帮忙翻译，非常感谢！！

Answer 1

Dear Manager,
Thank you very much for your reply. Sorry for bothering. I ordered two rooms in your hotel through HRS yesterday. But because of our new schedule, we have to cancel the order. Though we have transfered your email to them, the HRS said we had to get an approval agreeing us to cancel the order from you if we want to cancel order. I understand it is a waste of time for you and I am so sorry for keeping bothering you. But would you please kindly state clearly by email that you agree us to cancel the order so that we can show to the HRS?
Thank you very much for your help.
Best regards,
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朋友，不要把英文想象得像中文那么啰嗦重复噢，你的原文，在英文里很多可以省略，但也有很多地方需要加英文的，只要表达到你的意思就可以了。一楼的英文错误比较多噢，有待改善噢！

Answer 2

Dear hotel management personnel:
Thank you for your reply for my yesterday mail.The first,I'm soory for my disturbing.I have booked two rooms in your hotel from HRS,but now due to the change of my schedule I need to cancle the orders.HRS asked me to contact your hotel,and I sent your E-mial to HRS too.But HRS asked me to ask your hotel for a clear approval of the cancellation of orders,then HRS will cancel the orders for me.I'm so sorry because of my own reason,and I request your forgiveness once again.Also trouble you to return an E-mail to me to prove that your hotel agree to cancel the orders,thank you very much!
I don't English,this is my friend translate for me and send to you,if ill,please forgive me.
I'm sorry for taking up your precious time once again!
I wish you business flourishes, happy family!
Yours: XXX(你的名字)

希望能对你有所帮助，我自己翻译的，也许其中有所不妥。

Answer 3

Dear Hotel managers:
Thank you for your reply about my Email,in the first,sorry for bothering you,I booked two rooms from your hotel by HRS yesterday,by the reason of journey,I have to cancel the order now,HRS asked me to contact your hotel,I also sent your Email to HRS,but HRS asked me to inform your hotel to send them a specific approval of agreeing to cancel the order,only this HRS can help me cancel order.I'm so sorry for delaying your time due to my personal reason,please forgive me again,and send me an Email to show your willing to cancel the order.
Thank you for your help.
best regards:

Answer 4

不清楚~