一篇英语短文，帮忙找错啊！！！急用！谢谢。。。

Question

my sister is a dancer. she is 20 years old.she is a beautiful girl.when she was a little girl,she was interested in dance.my sister went to dance school when she was 6 years old.she likes dancing very much! so she practise dancing every day! as you can see,she is a good dancer.i think she can be famous.now,she's school is beijing dance school.【求结尾。。。】

急用啊。。。。

Answer 1

My sister is a dancer. she is 20 years old. she is a beautiful girl.when she was a little girl,she was interested in dancing . My sister went to a dancing school when she was 6 years old. She likes dancing very much! So she practises dancing every day! As you can see,she is a good dancer NOW .I  think she must  be famous. Now,her school is Beijing dance school.

Answer 2

楼主要记住一个句子的开头第一个字母是要大写的还有So 是不可以成为一个句子的开头。
My sister is a dancer. She is 20 years old and she is a beautiful girl. When she was a little girl,she was interested in dancing. My sister went to dance school when she was 6 years old. She likes to dance very much, so she practice dancing every day! As you can see,she is a good dancer.i think one day she will be famous. Now,her school is a dance school in Beijing. She always tells me that she want just want to dance forever and she loves her dance school. My sister is so inspirational to me, which makes me wonder what should I set my goal to be, so I could work towards it like she does.
这么长可以吗？ 如果觉得短的话跟我说追问

谢谢哦。。。

Answer 3

she was interested in dance. dance改为dancing

so she practise dancing practise改为practises
she's school she's改为her本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 4

she was interested in dance——应该是dancing
my sister went to dance school——舞蹈学校是dancing school
she's school is beijing dance school
——she is in beijing dancing school追问

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

Answer 5

was interested in (dancing)